Showing posts with label children's books. Show all posts
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Sunday, February 19, 2012

Suspense: Hitchcock for Readers, Writers, Creators

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At about time-mark 11:23,  this short interview with Alfred Hitchcock, "A Talk with Alfred Hitchcock," gives you clues to the director's greatest suspense scenes.  He discusses three techniques:
  • montage - juxtaposition of images of various "sizes"  - little shots grouped impressionistically to create a cumulative effect (e.g. focus on body parts, focus on objects in a room, focus on one specific action) - illustrated with Psycho shower scene, but I also think of the gathering crows in The Birds (safer to show to students)
  • orchestration - audience has partial knowledge of what to expect but does not know when or where it will happen - partial elements of the narrative are arranged sequentially to create shock - this is shifting point of view that film can make literal (illustrated with Psycho stairway murder, which uses multiple shot perspectives and angles)
  • pure cinematics - the assembly of film elements (specifically shots) and how they can be changed to create a different idea in manipulation of the viewer's response (illustrated by two sequences featuring Hitchcock himself)
What is the Literacy/ELA Parallel?  As we strive to give students a language for creative analysis,  we can peak their curiosity by applying the vocabulary and skills of the masters.  So here is a quick think about Hitchcock's terms above as applied to YA suspense lit:
Montage - In good suspense, language and images create an impressionistic scene as well.  This is often in a flight scene, a scene of approaching evil, or a climactic moment.  Some specific techniques to look for are repetition (incremental), strings of repeated descriptors (overwriting, often), phrases where sentences often do, polysyndenton (images and phrases strung together with a repeated conjunction), asyndenton (images and phrases strung together without conjunctions),  and terse dialogue without benefit of dialogue tags.  The overall effect is to heighten threat and chill.  Here is an example of montage used by Poe in "The Black Cat":

No sooner had the reverberation of my blows sunk into silence, than I was answered by a voice from within the tomb! -- by a cry, at first muffled and broken, like the sobbing of a child, and then quickly swelling into one long, loud, and continuous scream, utterly anomalous and inhuman -- a howl -- a wailing shriek, half of horror and half of triumph, such as might have arisen only out of hell, conjointly from the throats of the dammed in their agony and of the demons that exult in the damnation.

Orchestration - In part, this is the equivalent of foreshadowing in fiction.  The slow build of the expectation of an event is the result of knowledge introduced gradually, previous to an event.  The reader has a fully developed certainty - a sense of what I like to call vague dread - the is climaxed by the event itself.  Poe uses this technique brilliantly, staging his scenes with a terrific sense of pace and literary eye.  Here are three parts of this orchestration from "Three Skeleton Key":

No, these were ships’ rats, huge, wise creatures, born on the sea, sailing all over the world on ships, transferring to other, larger ships as they multiply. There is as much difference between the rats of the land and these maritime rats as between a fishing smack and an armored cruiser.
The rats of the sea were fierce, bold animals. Large, strong and intelligent, clannish and sea-wise, able to put the best of mariners of shame with their knowledge of the sea, their uncanny ability to foretell the weather.
And they are brave, the rats, and vengeful. If you so much as harm one, his sharp cry will bring hordes of his fellows to swarm over you, tear you, and not cease until your flesh has been stripped from your bones.
The ones on this ship, the rats of Holland, are the worst, superior to other rats of the sea as their brethren are to the land rats. ....  [and later]
Over her bridge, on her deck, in the rigging, on every visible spot, the ship was a writhing mass – a starving army coming toward us on a vessel gone mad!
Our island was a small spot in that immense stretch of sea. The ship could have grazed us, passed to port or starboard with its ravening cargo – but no, she came for us at full speed, as if she were leading the regatta at a race, and impaled herself on a sharp point of rock.
 ....  [and later]
Thousands of heads rose, felt the wind and we were scented, seen! To them, we were fresh meat, after possible weeks of starving. There came a scream, composed of innumerable screams, sharper than the howl of a saw attacking a bar of iron, and in the one motion, every rat leaped to attack the tower!

For the reader, the ending seems inevitable - it is just a matter of time.  On the other hand, the narrator seems to have survived to tell the story; so dreadful as his tale is, there is an escape.  The urgency of the prose, the frenetic sentencing, are the contributions of the writer's montageThe gradual introduction of knowledge is his orchestration.  The setting is his cimematics.

Cinematics - In a novel or story, the author uses point of view, narration (word choice, sentence pace and length), and dialogue to create the equivalent of a cinematic effect.  By zooming in and zooming out, by panning, by alternating pace and voices, the author can control the build of suspense.  Here is a short example from "Three Skeleton Key":

There was nothing we could do but watch. A ship sailing with all sail spread, creaming the sea with her forefoot as she runs before the wind, is one of the most beautiful sights in the world – but this time I could feel the tears stinging in my eyes as I saw this fine ship headed for her doom.
All this time our glasses were riveted on her and we suddenly cried out together:
“The rats!”

Would the last sentence be as powerful if it were: "The fuzzy caterpillars!"  I think that difference encapsulates much of the concept of cinematicsAuthors make multiple decisions simply to generate effect. Choice of setting (all aspects), character types, borrowed plot lines...  These all come into play when the purpose is to directly affect the reader's response. 
Literary analysis can be fun when this is the lens.

Beginnings:  It is always valuable to cement literary concepts by having students (any age) employ them in analysis of very simple works, and great picture books are best for this. These books send chills down the spine of even adult readers.  Ask: How are montage, orchestration, and cinematics important in this simple book?  How is the monster defeated? Making short screencast analyses on iPhones or iPads is a great activity for this. Students may notice repetition as important to building suspense. This is a form of verbal montage and cinematics. Some suggestions: 
  • Another Monster at the End of This Book - Stone (also and iPad app)
  • The Barenstain Bears and the Spooky Old Tree - (Barenstains) 
  • Chalk - Thomson
  • The Monster at the End of This Book - Stone (also and iPad app)
  • There's a Monster Under My Bed - Howe
  • There's a Nightmare in My Closet - Mayer
  • Woolves in the Walls - Gaiman
  • Woolvs in the Sitee - Wild and Spudvilas
  • read-aloud:  Grimm's and Anderson "Blackbeard," "Three Little Pigs," and "Three Billy Goats" and "Red Riding Hood"
Film:  One of the few times I recommend viewing before reading is to cement the concepts in this genre:
  • If students are not getting the analysis concepts, I strongly recommend, strange as it seems, Bambi, Land Before Time, Sleeping Beauty (beginning), Walking With Dinosaurs (BBC Video), and the other nature series that make kids cringe
  • Open Culture links to 22 Free Hitchcock Films to find online
  • It's hard to top classics like Jaws, It, Snakes on a Plane (R)the Bourne movies, Witness, 2001, Aliens - most teachers and students will have titles to share.  Several scenes illustrating the concepts above should be shown.
Novels & Stories:  Most of these are not appropriate below grade 8, so teachers need to read them first. Remember to also ask your students for suggestions.  Many of today's big tween and YA genres are suspenseful in nature, but many of them do not do it very well.  Most zombie and alien novels are suspenseful as well.  This is a great chance for students to use analysis and evaluation skills, so pick the best.  Your students do NOT have read the entire book - remember, you are reading for author's techniques with proof from the text (quotes).   Ask: What techniques have change as characters, plots, narratives get more complex in novels and stories?  What is added by these changes?  What techniques are most effective?  Why?  What other elements (characters, setting, plot, etc) are necessary to create memorable suspense?
  • Fakie - Tony Varrato
  • Found (1st in new series) - Margaret Peterson Haddix
  • Jasper Jones - Criag Silvey
  • The Lovely Bones - Alice Sebold
  • Miss Peregrin's Home for Peculiar Children - Ransom Riggs
  • The Shattering - Karen Healey
  • Skeleton Man - Bruchac - a very good suspense novel for 5-7 grades
  • Tantalize series - Cynthia Leitich Smith
  • The Vanishing Game - Kate Kae Meyers 
  • Stephen King: just about any one of his horror genre
  • "The Most Dangerous Game" - Connell - read online or download audio
  • "The Black Cat" or "The Tell-Tale Heart" - Poe - widely available online in text and audio
  • "Three Skeleton Key" - Toudouze - download .pdf or read online - also free in radio drama version (quite good)
  • "The Landlady" - Dahl (good audio version also available from Audible.com) - in The Best of Roald Dahl 
  • "Night Drive" - Jenkins (aka Murray Leinster) - also available here in audio (the story actually begins about 1/3 of the way into the .mp3 file)
  • "The Lottery" - Jackson - read it online
Follow-up:
  • A later segment in the Hitchcock interview talks about what music adds to a suspenseful scene (again Psycho).  I have never played music while students read a suspenseful story, but it would be an interesting exercise to have them, after reading through a suspenseful piece, read it themselves with music they selected or (better yet) composed in the background.
  • Students love to use available technologies to create their own suspense shorts.  I think it is important to set a gruesomeness limit so that the focus is on the techniques, not the blood.
  • Ask:  What is the next step in building 21st Century suspense?  Visuals, music, and text have been widely explored. What other technologies or mixes will be used in the future? 

Thursday, February 2, 2012

The Literacy of Failure: Failing and Failing Forward

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Failure is the new buzz word for the classroom.  Just today I read that good classroom apps for the  iPad embrace failure: "this culture of learning from adversity" (Jenny Magiera).  Interestingly, while professing to discuss failure, Magiera is really talking about adversity and success through personalization and differentiation.

Failure and adversity are not the same thing.  Adversity means difficulties or misfortune.  The word carries the connotation that a successful struggle is waged against these difficulties or misfortunes. Adversity is a temporary down.  Ironically, in YA literature, a protagonist's adversity is often caused by adult failures: divorce, neglect, abuse, abandonment, confusion, ineptitude...

Failure, on the other hand, means lack of success.  Implied in failure as descriptor is action something is tried that does not work. Failure is a real down.  Educators are easy on adversity, if slow to embrace it, but they shy away from failure. 

This is what the career-focused message of talking heads is all about.  It's time to get tougher in the classroom, so that failure is a very real, even probable, option.  Learning how to face it, get up and begin again, or change direction and focus so that success is a different option, are what is missing from today's classrooms.  But not missing from life.


The above two Rules from Dumbing Down Our Kids by Charles Sykes say it well.  Unfortunately,  not even iPad apps are created in the spirit of failure - sorry, teachers who think new apps are a panacea for the "have it too easy" generations.  As Magiera has learned, they are useful for working through how a failure happened, but so is f2f conversation.

How then, do students learn how to fail forward - learn how to learn from failure?

The ELA teacher can help. Experienced teachers know that failure is embedded in the writing process, and that talking though writing failures is essential to improvement.

Students should not only write, but also read, about failure.  Models for failure in YA novels are few and far between, but they can be found.  Adversity, on the other hand, is all over the place - it is perhaps the soul of fiction, memoir and creative non-fiction.  If reading about adversity were enough, we would not be pounded over the head with the message that "failure is the [missing] key to success."  To learn about failure, students need to (1) experience it and (2) read engaging texts about it. 

What are the key identifiers of a good literary failure?  After reading through both business and educational discussions of the topic, I identify these traits that we should look for in failure-based texts:
  • A character exhibits a growth in character through the failure - no growth, no rising above failure (some characters wallow in it) and no avoiding it later on
  • A character who bounces back from failure displays "zest, grit, self-control, social intelligence, gratitude, optimism and curiosity" while doing so (source: NYTimes) - to which I would add adaptability.  My criticism of this list of traits is that is not enough to differentiate failure from overcoming adversity. 
  • Failure is a result of intentional (not accidental) risk-taking
  • Failure is scary - characters fear the consequences of failure
  • Failure results when the challenge is hard or when it requires a significant change in behavior or expectation
  • Failure is a result of a character's own shortcomings
  • There is no shelter from a good failure - no safety net - or it won't happen (e.g.  the character is on his/her own)
  • Bouncing back from failure requires seeking and listening to good feedback, and then doing something different. There is quite a science growing around the idea of failing forward, which Bob Sutton in the Harvard Business Review (blog) describes as "The basic idea is, as soon as feasible after some action occurs, a facilitator and/or teacher should have a conversation with the key participants about what went right, what went wrong, and what could be done better next time."
  • Often, bouncing back is not possible - a character must bounce sideways
  • Examining what failed in a successful experience leads to learning
  • Failure is painful
  • For a character, failure can be final - which is to say, it may lead to death (this is also true of a business or a business product) or to an entire change in life's direction (not necessarily a bad thing)
Compare this list to the top 20 lists of YA literature. Few contemporary protagonists, be they normal or extraordinary young people, fail. Those who do fail, and survive failure, do not generally pause to reflect, gather feedback, and metacognate on what went well.  I suggest that most novels read in ELA classrooms are anti-failure models.  Like a classroom or school in which "everyone succeeds" - in which all efforts are roundly praised - contemporary protagonists, even those in darkly dystopian or realistic tales, do not suffer as a result of their own shortcomings.

No wonder we find that teens avoid situations that challenge their shortcomings, that C is the new F, that teachers are not challenging students with problems that can be failed.  Such as novels that are at the top of the Lexile range or essays that ask students to apply difficult ideas to a text.

Below I am providing some Resources for reading failure-based text.  It is interesting to me that most of these resources are at the HS level.  This suggests to me that the adult world of authors also does not believe that children can deal with the idea of failure.  Hmm.

What we need to do is to embed conversation about failure in our classrooms, to open the pipe, so to speak.  All of the resources below can spearhead that discussion.  This conversation is also, of course, an exercise in critical thinking.

Chidren's Books - It is interesting that there are endless lists of children's books about dealing with divorce, disease, disability, death, moving, potty training, and dentistry.  But very few about failure. 
  • Ish (Reynolds) - about not being perfect
  • The Girl Who Never Made Mistakes (Pett and Rubenstein) - an elementary school girl who (learning to fail)
  • The Berenstain Bears - Poppa is often guilty of failure, as are Brother and Sister - a good place to start might be The Berenstain Bears Picnic
  • Peanuts - Charlie Brown
Fiction, Drama - None of these is appropriate for elementary school.  Isn't it curious how few pieces I have identified?  Suggestions welcome.
  • Only You Can Save Mankind (Pratchett) - video game turns out to be real and failure to not win has a consequence (600L)
  • One-Eyed Cat (Fox) - boy shoots cat (1000L)
  • The Stone-Faced Boy (Fox) - failure to deal, but also failure to communicate
  • Wintergirls (Anderson) - eating disorders - one friend fails, the other succeeds (730L)
  • Jellicoe Road - (Marchetta) - consequences of a failure through two generations - fear of failure (820L)
  • Rash (Hautman) - failing forward in a future world (730L)
  • Ender's Game (Scott Card) - in which failure must be redirected (780L)
  • Romeo and Juliette - the failures of support systems  (can be read as early as 7th with some editing)
  • Monster (Myers) - is the failure the boy or the system?
  • Scorpions (Myers) - boy's experiment with gang life (610L)
  • Fahrenheit 451 (Bradbury) - future citizen faces his failure to resist (890L)
  • Othello - failure of trust
  • The Death of a Salesman - the failures of a salesman and father
  • The Mayor of Casterbridge (Hardy) - persistent gloom of failure as only Hardy can do it (1090L)
  • Catcher in the Rye - read as a failure story, is this going to be a failing forward or just the blame game?  (790L)
  • The Spy Who Came In From the Cold (le Carre) - great spy stuff anti-hero - also a new movie 
  • The Secret Agent (Conrad) - an earlier classic spy failure (1030L)
  • Seize the Day (Bellow) - down and out adult
  • Billy Liar (Waterhouse) - Yorkshire youth - 1959 - also a good film
  • Jasper Jones (Silvey) - Australian youth - Vietnam War Era - Prinz Prize and one of my current favorites for YA
Non-fiction - you might find the contrast of the articles and the first text to be ironic.  The irony becomes less when we realize that characters who are alone - who have no one with whom to talk - fail with more finality. 
Film and Media
  • Race to Nowhere - high-powered adolescent girl suicide
  • Fail-Safe (1964) - a classical look at military failure
  • Waiting for Superman - the failure of the educational system
  • Billy Liar (1963)
  • It's a Wonderful Life
  • The Apprentice: The Complete First Season - DVD - no one pounces on failure better than Donald Trump 
  • Iron Chef - TV and DVD of series
  • Survivor - play any episode and focus on the last few minutes: how is failure dealt with?  Is this a growing experience
  • The Amazing Race - play any episode and focus on how teams make adjustments
  • video games or game apps - any shoot 'em game, it seems - "Given that every game eventually ends in failure, there's a surprising amount of variety here" (review of Ziggurat app)

Thursday, January 12, 2012

Underground - Reading into the Subterranean Metaphor

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There was time in my young adulthood when underground definitely meant nonconformist; challenging society; outside the mainstream, in hiding.  There was the Underground Railroad, the Weather Underground, the Urban Underground, the underground of poetry, music, and art.  It still means this.  There are, for example, many sites where underground eBooks can be downloaded and there are real dark coffee houses where underground artists can found.

It also means hidden but worthy of exposure. The urban underground holds the clues to restaurants, bargains, and the best of hip life. Underground guides tell the real truth about Google, universities, interviewing, travel destinations, standardized tests, and just about everything else - well over 1,000 titles are listed by Amazon alone.

And underground is still and always has been a place.  The nature of this place is the focus of my interest today.  Essential Questions:  What are the persistent elements of The Underground in k-12 texts and media?  Why are we attracted to this metaphor?  How and why do we get Underground?

Picture Books and Early Childhood - It is difficult to find underground spaces in picture books - they are too scary. The nearest thing is the abundant otherplaces that are found. These range from the very close and real (under the bed, in the closet or attic) to the fanciful (faraway islands, imaginary lands). To a child, all is imagination - so otherplace and realplace are allowed to intersect. Readers of the MS and YA books on this list will find the same, or similar, places. Older students should discuss this. In general, it is enough to point out to younger students the other places and what they do/do not contain, to discuss the emotions connected to them (inference exercise, often), and to discuss how the protagonist responds to the experience of being or confronting in the other place.  The realization of the reader is often personal because of this connection.  Older students will remember these connections.
  • Babar and Zephir - Jean De Brunhoff
  • Where the Wild Things Are and In the Night Kitchen - Maurice Sendak
  • The Berenstain Bears and the Spooky Old Tree - Stan and Jan Berenstain
  • The Dark at the Top of the Stairs - Sam McBratney
  • There's a Monster Under My Bed - James Howe
  • There's a Nightmare in My Closet - Mercer Mayer
  • Chris Van Allsburg - The Garden of Abdul Gagazi, Jumanji, The Polar Express, Zathura
  • fairy tales: Hansel and Gretel, Bluebird (might be too scary), Jack and the Beanstalk, Snow Queen
  • Rainbow Fish and the Sea Monster's Cave - Marcus Pfister - early reader, read aloud
  • The Minipins - Roald Dahl - forest - early reader, read aloud
  • The Secret Shortcut - Mark Teague - jungle - early reader, read aloud
  • Very Last First Time - Jan Andrews - bottom of the sea - early reader, read aloud
  • Alistair Underwater - Marilyn Sadler - a very deep pond - early reader, read aloud
  • James and the Giant Peach - Roald Dahl - inside a giant peach - read aloud and on-your-own after grade 3 or so
  • Film: Finding Nemo, Alice in Wonderland (animated)
As is true of zombie texts and metafiction texts, the critical teacher will find that there is a spiraling change in the meanings and interpretations of the metaphor as the texts become more advanced and complex.  Student readers above the elementary level should definitely read up and across the spiral.  That is to say, all readers should read and process at least one text from the lower reading level(s) and examine at least one form each of media and informational text at each of the level(s) (sometimes not possible for film).


Upper Elementary - Middle - At this level, underground begins to have metaphorical significance; setting often becomes itself an antagonist.  Look for mazes, dark happenings, confusion, threat - all of which are associated with a world that the protagonist must "work through" and ultimately "rise above" or, a wonderful exception, accept and join.
  • Alice in Wonderland - Lewis Carroll - a must read
  • Tunnels (series) - Roderick Gordon - SF, with classical allusions - patience is necessary with Book 1's beginning, but after that the subterranean fantasy fun begins 
  • Journey to the Center of the Earth - H. G. Wells
  • The Dark Portal (series) - Robin Jarvis - mice, rats, cats, good and evil
  • The City of Ember (series) - Jeanne DuPrau - the 1st book is especially significant for this metaphor, as the child protagonists escape an underground world
  • The Girl Who Fell Beneath Fairyland and Led the Revels There - Catherynne Valente - there is Fairyland and then there is Fairyland Below... - sequel
  • Slake's Limbo - Felice Holman - orphaned run-away lives underground in NYC - metaphorical and lyrical, so it challenges today's MS readers, which is unfortunate
  • "Orpheus" and "Theseus and the Minotaur" - the myths are available in many forms - must reads
  • The Shadow Thieves (Cronus Chronicles) - Anne Ursu - like Percy Jackson, the protagonists travel into the mythic underground - this book is the better by far
  • The Graveyard Book - Neil Gaiman
  • Book of Lost Things - John Connolly
  • Kit's Wilderness - David Almond
  • The Underland Chronicles - Suzanne Collins - Middle to YA - series of 5 fantasies about a boy hero named Gregor, a world under NYC, and dark happenings
  • The Infernal Devices (series) - Cassandra Claire - Victorian London underground
  • also underground elements in: The Lord of the Rings, The Time Machine, Ship Breaker, Mockingjay, Maze Runner
YA - although YA readers can read and enjoy the above books, the titles below move into the dark underground of the soul and the mazes of fear and awareness that almost-adults can and should be confronting.
  • Neverwhere - Neil Gaiman
  • A Star Called Henry - Roddy Doyle - Irish uprising - survival means learning to travel underground
  • Everneath (series) - Brodi Ashton - young woman stolen by a steamy immortal (sound familiar?)
  • Enclave - Anne Aguirre - April 2012 - YA update of The City of Ember
  • Notes from the Underground - Fyodor Dostoevsky - freely download one ebook translation here - another from Project Gutenberg - Schmoop's guide is useful for HS students reading this challenging metaphorical text
  • Plato's allegory of The Cave
  • Invisible Man - Ralph Ellison - metaphorically and also literally underground, this black narrator reflects on his life and how he chooses to live it - Schmoop's Guide
  • This Side of Brightness - Colum McCann - subway society in NYC
  • The Woman in the Dunes - Kobo Abe - Japanese surreal
  • Inferno - Dante - painted images of this descent into Hell are also great text
  • The Underground Man - Mick Jackson
  • Subterranean - James Rollins - not deep literature, but a good modern read of the SF adventure variety
  • The Great Stink - Clare Clarke - Victorian England sewer construction, but also a murder mystery 
  • King Rat - China Mieville - wonderful fantasy, but only for persistent readers
  • Level 7 - Mordecai Roshwald - dystopian
  • The Descent - Jeff Long - cave
  • In the Skin of a Lion - Michael Ondaatje - literal tunnel-digger, metaphorical plunge - overlaps with characters in The English Patient
  • "The Defenders" - Philip K. Dick - free for Kindle - post-apocalypse

Film and other Media - Viewer/readers should ask: What is the purpose of the underground in this film?  How does it serve as allegory for or parallel to our world?  How does Underground in film compare to Underground in fiction and fact?  I have put the films in order of age-appropriateness, but teachers need to preview them before using.
  • Finding Nemo - corny, maybe, but the underground cave scenes are worth study
  • Journey to the Center of the Earth - multiple versions are available
  • The Time Machine - Morlock sequences
  • Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull - have to love those caverns
  • Metropolis - YA (boring to MS kids), but MS students should be able to get the message from selected clips
  • Tremors - pure SF - giant worms in the desert - PG 13
  • The Matrix - focus upon those scenes of the alternative underground society
  • Voices in the Tunnels: In Search of the Mole People - YA
  • Dark Days - YA
  • Saving Grace - the new Canadian film - YA
  • The Descent - cave (not the same as the novel) - YA
Informational text - for elementary students, there are lots of good informational skinny books about building subways and exploring caves. I recommend a trip to the library.  These titles are selected to support the MS and YA fiction titles. 
  • Graffiti Lives: Beyond the Tag in New York's Urban Underground  - Gregory J. Snyder
  • The City Beneath Us: Building the New York Subway - New York Transit Museum - wonderful photographs
  • The Mole People: Life in the Tunnels Beneath New York City - Jennifer Toth
  • "The Vertical Topography of the Science Fiction Film" - a serious and scholarly look at various underground spaces
  • "West Side Improvements"- a graphical iJournalism piece found in Synchopated: an Anthology of Nonfiction Picto-essays
  • Hollow Earth: A Long and Curious History of Imagining Strange Lands... - David Standish
Gaming
  • Tunnels and Trolls - a multi-player or solo-player role-play and problem-solving game similar to Dungeons and Dragons - all of the rule books and encounter/master guides can be freely downloaded at the site 
  • Steamscope HD - the ultimate tunnel experience - only for iPad 2  

Friday, December 16, 2011

Review - The Artifacts : an iPad storybook app

Slap Happy Larry has released The Artifacts, a interactive story book app ($1.99) designed with iPad toting middle schoolers in mind.  Or it is an interactive children's book for iPad grabbing curious kids as young as 3 or 4.  It works well both ways.


I celebrate this effort from Lynley Stace (illustration and story) and Dan Hare (code) for many reasons.  First, the concept of a book written entirely for the iPad environment is exciting.  In this particular case, animations are of course clever and generally hidden - meant to be discovered by the reader - but most iPad children's books contain this feature. What is new is the depth and number of animations hidden on a single page.  In some ways, this book reminds me of visual logo projects I directed a decade ago. The better students used every possible pixel to hide a triggered effect, at times having event trigger event, at times having a click or random timing do the same, and included layer upon layer of events. All senses are essential to the story of this boy who has only his own imagination and mind for company.  He uses both differently on every page. This switching up is a large part of the fun of The Artifacts.  Better yet, it makes for the perfect classroom text: it self-teaches.



Second, there is learning to be done here. On pages 9 (my new room) and 18 (brushing my choppers), tapping produces an endless stream of wonderful words that must be read.  Patterns can be discerned by the patient readers.  Page 15 (inside my head) produces a fireworks of dates and random facts that are the stuff of middle school. 


Third, there is something comfortably and familiarly Harry Potterish about The Artifacts.  Even the music seems to echo the opening theme of the Potter movies. The texts would be great twins.  Comparing the characters, the plots, and the visual effects would be a terrific and engaging exercise for middle school.  It is about time for Harry to surface again in the classroom library.  There are allusions also to The Little Prince, to fairy tales, to great sea tales, and to the stuff of horror and magic.  There is much here for a wide-ranging reader to muse about.


Last, a small point. The "credits" that end this little text contain a long list of sound clips from open sources.  That is a model for student creators.

Which is just right, as The Artifacts is a celebration of the power of individual thought and imagination. It is at the top of Bloom's triangle.  I highly recommend it for middle school iPads.

Read about The Artifacts

Sunday, December 11, 2011

The Circus: Reading Across Time - The Circus

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In 10th grade I refused to read the last 3/4 of Gone With the Wind.  Had this novel not been followed immediately by Moby Dick, I would have foresworn much of American Literature entirely. Luckily, I moved on to a course called Humanities, which trapped me forever in the connections between literature, the arts, and history (it was taught by a team of three brilliant teachers - a unique experience in 1964). 

Come round to ELA under the new Common Core.  One way to read the standards is that texts for units of study need to be intertwined by theme but diverse by media.  Makes sense, if the goal is to develop critical evaluation and comparison skills. 

I am talking to HS teachers here, but also keeping in mind the two 8th grade girl-readers who sparked my interest in this topic.  The Topic is The Circus, specifically the American circus.

I grew up in the Midwest, but did  not see a circus until we moved to NJ.  I did not see a sideshow until "Alive, alive, alive" beckoned me at the Topsham Fair (Topsham, Maine) 30 years later.  Nonetheless, I purchased circus posters to plaster my walls in college. The Big Apple Circus and the Cirque du Soleil are favorite memories. For years I could sing every song from Carousel and Carnival.  There is definitely something about the circus.

That something was piqued by a student asking me to read a new novel called The Night Circus.  I reviewed it quickly, then told her that I would read with her if she would read Bradbury.  That was the beginning.

Exploring interconnected texts in order to pique my two young readers, I have discovered a unit.  It is on the strange side.  Definitely sexy, horrific, grotesque, hormonal, brutal, and confusing.  Just right, I judge, for today's kids. Perfect to put under the Humanities flag and use to address the CCSS.

Essential Questions
  • Historical: How does the development of the circus as entertainment mirror changes in a culture?  (focus on the American circus timeline)
  • Literature & Media: How does the circus serve as metaphor(s) for the human condition?  How does this metaphor play out in different media? 
  • Personal: What is the allure of the circus?  What serves as the circus in your life?  How do you interact with it? 
Core Fiction

The Circus of Dr. Lao - Charles G. Finney (1935)
Something Wicked This Way Comes - Ray Bradbury (1962) - also available as a graphic novel
Le Cirque de Magie - Marsha A. Moore (2011) - short story - Amazon $.99 download for Kindle
The Night Circus - Erin Morgenstern (2011) -
  • Review - New York Times
  • Review - The Guardian
  • Review - Paste Magazine - with comparisons to Harry Potter
Core children's fiction:
  • Circus Ship - Chris Van Dusen - picture book (2009)
  • If I Ran the Circus - Dr. Seuss - picture book (1956)
  • Lowly Worm Joins the Circus - Richard Scarry (1998)
  • Mr. Galliano's Circus (1938) OR The Circus of Adventure (1952) - Enid Blyton
  • Cirque du Freak: a living nightmare (#1 in series) - Darren Shan   
Core informational text:
  • "Step Right Up" - History Magazine
  • "Night at the Circus" - Cirque du Soleil - The New Yorker 
  • "Circus Stories" - Circus Unlimited - interviews, etc. with performers
  • Circus and Carnival Ballyhoo: Sideshow Freaks, Jabbers and Blade Box Queens - A.W. Stencell (2010)
  • The Circus Book - Jando and Daniel (2010)
Core films and media: (all but the first two available from Amazon.com)
  • American Memory - The First Circus (1921) - you want Part 2, MPEG format - online
  • Circus Dreams - purchase at site - true story of teen circus
  • The Greatest Show on Earth - DVD (1956)
  • Carnival - Original cast recording - CD (1961)
  • The Seven Faces of Dr. Lao - DVD (1963)
  • Circus of Fear - DVD (1967)
  • Dr Who - Carnival of Monsters - DVD of TV series (1975) 
  • The Funhouse - DVD (1981 - horror)
  • Something Wicked This Way Comes - DVD (1983)
  • Carnivale - the complete first season - DVD (2003) - from TV series
  • Cirque du Freak: the vampire's assistant - DVD (2009)
Core visuals:
Core poetry:

ee cummings
 Damn everything but the circus!
. . . damn everything that is grim, dull,
motionless, unrisking, inward turning,
damn everything that won't get into the
circle, that won't enjoy, that won't throw
its heart into the tension, surprise, fear
and delight of the circus, the round
world, the full existence . . .
http://www.everything2.com/title/Damn+everything+but+the+circus%2521

ee cummings
Buffalo Bill's
http://homepages.wmich.edu/~cooneys/poems/cummings.bill.html

Vine McCasland
Circus
http://www.bartleby.com/273/89.html

Roden Berkeley Wriothesley Noel
The Merry-Go-Round


Research ideas:
  • Circus Maximus and Roman circus (amphitheaters)
  • Wild West Shows
  • Great American circuses and circus acts
  • Treatment of sideshow and circus actors (human and animal)
  • Clowns - fearful or funny?
  • Depression-era circus in America (mid-West)
  • Horror as a post a WWII genre
  • Carousel and Carnival - circus in the musical theater 
  • Concept: media circus, merry-go-round 
Related short stories:
  • Bradbury:  "Hail and Farewell" and "The Playground" (Kindle download)
Student projects:  There are so many options, in all media formats, creative and analytical, that I would let the students come up with something independently.  Responses will probably be influenced by personal discoveries of circus metaphor (longing, love, fear, death, entrapment, control, evil, laughter, etc.)  Essays addressing the essential questions, of course, would be appropriate.

Saturday, September 24, 2011

Almost-Great Bad Guys for Almost-Adult Level Readers

Piggy Pie, Margie Palatini, illus. by Howard Fine
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My "iLearn Essay" - I have written in a form students should be practicing in middle school.  The essay is a record of a journey to learning and realization.

Yet another school year dedicated to bullying causes me to wonder why our kids are not getting the point. I have decided that the approach must be wrong. The focus of every program I have experienced or reviewed is What to do as a victim or onlooker.  Perhaps the focus should be on the bully - Why does she do it? What is she after?  [update 10/16/13: empathy for the bad guy is the topic of a recent scientific study, which suggests to me that the more literately drawn the bad guy is, the more complex the reading experience will be.]


I have not met in education or other life many adults who truly bullied me - exactly two. The things they did, to me and to others, were equivalently unpleasant.  Yet the two could not have been more different in method, in motive, in planning, in rationalization, in ethics, and in the nature of their actions.  The word bad does not begin to describe these bullies as individuals, but, from my perspective, the word Bad does provide an adequate encapsulation of their actions.  The important bold point is this: We do not understand individuals or their actions through plot lines. We learn about individuals and actions by studying people. 


But teachers know this.  So do good parents.  Understanding individuals requires effort, attention, patience, and - generally - creativity.  Which, in my mind, makes the study of the Bad Guy a perfect focus for addressing Common Core reading and writing skills at any level.  As characters, the Great and Almost-Great Bad are far more challenging than the good guys.

But the Bad Guy (by any name) is rarely studied in the classroom, dismissed as either shallow or too hard to handle.  Googling "bad guys in video games" yielded 330,000,000 hits, but "bad guys in literature" yielded only 1/5 of that. Sites such as BretiLinks and Schmoop ignore the Bad or, at best, give the Bad Guy cursory mention under the term Antagonist.

You will remember that the origin of Protagonist is in Greek theater. The term was used for the actor who played the chief part, often meaning he who literally entered the stage first. Not all protagonists were Good Guys. Consider Medea and Agamemnon - complex people whose actions are not good and who fit my definition of the Almost-Great Bad-Action Guy. When we study Medea, we study choices, morality and the nature of our relationship to life and death. We think and feel deeply. 

Generally, the protagonist's - hence the child/almost-adult/adult reader's - point of view clouds his perception of the complex nature of the fictional antagonist.  Siding with the piggies in Piggy Pie, we delight in the demise of Gritch the Witch.  But by stepping back to explore her (OK, relatively flat) character, we come to realize with this reviewer that she has "a comic audacity that makes her trouncing all the better" (Amazon).  How the middle school hallways would change if children delighted in the trouncing of bullies!

Bad Guys should be studied, and it is far safer for a middle school to study them in fiction than in fact.  This study should be an entry into The Race to Stop Bullying.  So I propose that there be, at least once in each year, a shift in focus - from the Good Guy to the Bad Guy.  As is true in any text selection process, only the best examples should be used for study.  So what follows is a guide to selecting texts with Great Bad Guys, with further argument for the importance of the proposed unit.

A Great Bad Guy is a round character - understood in motive, thought, feelings, and actions. He [of course She also] is multi-leveled and complex.  We develop a perverse sympathy for the Great Bad Guy, a push-pull attraction like that of a moth circling a candle.  This character's depth is less about his actions than about why he is bad and why he chooses to continue being bad.  We carefully consider his options as we read. We delight in his fall, and we remember it.

Or, as stated in The Top 100 Videogame Villains :   "So what makes a great villain? He or she not only has to pose a real threat to the hero, but they have to be memorable. It's a villain's destiny to be defeated. That's just how it goes. But when the villain lives on in our hearts rather than the hero, they've won in their own way." 

This is not the stuff of picture books and fairy tales; it is the stuff of analysis

Bringing Bad Guys to the attention of the Almost-Adult reader is important. Grade 7 or 8 is high time for students to begin meta-thinking about ethics and morality. Many 6's are ready as well.  The problem is that kids are learning a lot about what it means to be a bully-fighter, a successful protagonist, but learning little about what makes the antagonist tick.  All kids have in them the seeds of Bad.  We don't want to just hate those impulses - we want to understand them.


My husband and I have just finished reading a series of mysteries called Shardlake, by C.J. Sansom.  Because we were reading as a 2-person lit-circle (on iPad and Kindle), we talked. Much as the horrific England of Henry VIII's last years depressed us, the Bad Guys in the books enervated us.  There is no one slimy-badder than Richard Rich, no motives more unforgiving than those of the Duke of Norwich.  These were historically real people - what they do in the book they actually did do, in concept if not in actuality.  Great Bad People are plentiful in history, which is another reason students need to begin to think about them. But in made-up life it is not easy to find Great Bad Guys.  That is even more true in middle-level than in adult level fiction.

As John and I discussed Shardlakes's nemeses, all of whom were totally creepy but also all of whom fell short of the roundness of Great,  I asked John (also a retired ELA teacher), about  truly Great Bad Guys he has met in literature. Shakespeare's Richard III, Macbeth, Edmund, Claudius, Iago...  Dickens' Uriah Heep, Scrooge (before he is reformed), Madame Defarge...  We concluded that the list of Great Bad Guys in adult fiction is remarkably short, and largely confined to the works of the great pre-20th century writers and those modern novelists who set out to develop all major characters thoroughly and who do not shy away from deeply drawn, ambivalent Bad (Morrison, Knowles, and Penn Warren, McCarthy, King, and Larsson come to mind).  I did find online this list of the 50 Greatest Villains in Literature, but only 11 can possibly be considered YA and only two would be at all appealing to today's students. The list is a bit out of date, and I don't agree with its choices anyway. So I have decided to make my own list.

Villains are Bad, no doubt about that.  They are memorable for their actions. But to return to my definition, they are not Great unless their appeal lies more in their complexity than in their actions.  Villains, by and large, comprise the stereotype that students should learn to identify. It is, however, rare to find a complex villain in almost-adult level print fiction. There may, in fact, be more complexity in comic book, video game and film villains than there is in print. Why is this? Because these are powerful media for kids who want to face down Bad.  And media is built on stereotype. For the most part, print can go deeper.

Woolvs in the Sitee, Wild and Spudvilas
Elemental forces - emotions, weather, disease and Society/Culture - are often better bad guys than written-to-be-bad characters. Dystopian and survival fiction take advantage of this. But forces can not be Great Bad Guys, because they are by definition 1-dimensional and implacable.  The almost-adult reader can not begin to grapple with any underlying social or cosmic complexity, if it is even there. Elemental power is in the ways it acts upon a protagonist and in the after-effects of these actions - not in reason, feeling, or intellect.  Nonetheless, a few elemental forces titles should be on the reading list, simply because the best elemental bad guys grow in complexity over the span of a story, a novel, or a series.  A classic example is The Ring; a modern classic example is The Capital as a force in The Hunger Games trilogy.

What about Cruelty?

"Just as ants will bring down a slug and then carry it away (we saw it on TV), so the Spotty Bulorb is surrounded in its sleep, worn down and then killed. While its children watch! Or maybe you killed them first? OK, so it's just like nature. But nature is so cruel" (The Top 10 Game Bad Guys You Don't Want to Kill).

Cruel is the most common 1-word analysis of the Bad Guy. Cruel describes an action more accurately than it describes a person.  As the above quotation indicates, cruelty does not choose favorites: a protagonist will be cruel in order to win, in error, or in anger. Do we then label that (generally remorseful) character as Bad?  Cruel is the descriptor most basic to Bad stereotype, and therefore most to be avoided as a label. It is best to always discuss motive along with actions.

Ironically, the most powerfully drawn Bad Guys operate on the protagonists with the inevitability of elemental forces, making it easy to view them as such. This is not good enough.  These characters need to be clearly identified for what they are, in all the aspects of character.

Jabberwocky, illustrated by Christopher Myers
Men and Monsters are also often 1-dimensional, which is a simple explanation for the paucity of Great and Almost-Great Bad Guys in middle-level fiction. This is a result of the easy, often media-centric, stereotypes that shape the bad guys.  Pale, piercing-small-blue-eyed (or glowing red-eyed), tall, disfigured, sadistic, very smart, dark clothed, mysterious, shadowy, slithery, relentless, blood-thirsty... and powerful.  I love the bad guys in the Bourne movies, spy thrillers, X-men, TV shows, etc., and I love loving them. But they engender in me no feelings of curiosity, sympathy, or understanding. In contrast, the best Almost-Great Bad Guys arouse a questioning response in the reader. 

A note about parallel informational text: I don't find it at all surprising that YA fiction stops short of drawing the Bad Guy roundly.  Real bad guys do terrible things to millions of innocent people. I googled "bad guys list" and quickly found this list of the Top 10 Most Evil Men.   I suppose if you have to accommodate the Common Core by finding non-fiction text to parallel novels and stories, you might share this list with middle schoolers.  Most middle schoolers love to list gruesome facts, make timelines, t-shirts, vodcasts, and Keynotes about information.  There are also undoubtedly local news reports of murder, rape and abuse - a community connection to information - that can be read as parallel texts. 

What really would be gained by this parallel reading?  I have a brilliant friend who has spent much of his adult life trying to understand - to think around - Nazism and Fascism.  His writing is dense and psychological.  Not middle school stuff.  At best, a middle schooler researching Hitler would find the actions interesting in a push-pull way, but the person would be understood in as a 1-dimensional, stereotypical bad-guy. There is NO true learning in this type of interaction with text.  And I doubt that there can be at this level.  

This leads me to believe that a middle-level understanding of historical bad guys and real bad guys is best gained through fiction.  Exploration of a fictional Almost-Great Bad Guy, deeply discussed with peers, can lead to insights into the world of Bad, just as a toddler gains understanding of real-world fears by reading a "scary" book over and over again. Authors of books for children, after all, bring adult understandings of Bad to their creations.  In the best literature, the child reader, of any age, is given more information than he can process.  Intuitively, the reader returns again and again to the book, the picture, the Bad Guy in a series, to thresh out what this Badness is all about.  Pulling the resulting connections forward is what reading-for-understanding is all about.

So teachers must take the time to:
  1. select the best fiction and 
  2. talk about and focus upon the Bad Guys, not just their good-guy opponents (and, generally, conquerors).
Fiction can also be film.  It is not just accommodating the Common Core but also good practice to make a media connection to fiction.  There are some excellent Bad Guy models in films appropriate for middle-level readers and in "adult" films that can be safely clipped (YouTube clips are generally available). Here is a look at the top 50 Most Vile Movie Villains (too bad it does not go past 2008 - some great films are missing - and we only see 26 titles here).  Not many of these films are appropriate for the 12-15 year old crowd, so I have gathered my own list of Almost-Great and Great Bad Guys in films for middle-level viewers (some will require parent permission).

Is Bad different for girl readers?  Many almost-adult girl readers prefer romance or realistic fiction to fantasy/SF, historical fiction, or adventure (in my experience, it is about half and half).  Although my definition of the Almost-Great Bad Guy works across genre, it is interesting to note that there are patterns of Bad that are found almost totally in romance and "for girls" realistic fiction.
Polomoche - Babar and Zephir - a predator?
  1. The sexual predator.  I can not do a better job with this concept that that done in YA, Romance and Rape Culture.  This essay needs to be read, and its ideas discussed, with almost-adult girl readers of this genre.  I have put on my list a few titles mentioned in the post (and the linked-to post), but not Lovely Bones, which many of my girls would want to see included. 
  2. The queen bee. Boys are not interested in this very female type of bullying, but many girls thrive on the series devoted to Queens and Wannabe's.  I am putting only The Clique series on my list, judging others to be too vapid or too sexually charged (read more in Naomi Wolf's article), but any middle or high school library will carry many titles in this genre.  It is interesting to me that although the Queen Bee is a Bad Guy, and in at least one Clique book an Almost-Great Bad Guy, it is girl culture that is the true Bad Guy.  This is a realization for the adult reader, however, making The Clique a good litmus test for passage to almost-adult reading. 
Is Bad different for boy readers?  In my experience, girls can handle graphical violence and physical acts in literature on par with boys, although girls may not seek them out quite as avidly.  In general, boys want action in their reading. Boys want the Dark to be dealt with swiftly, in harsh small confrontations leading to a majestic final confrontation. Shades of grey are difficult for most middle-level boys, who will not often analyze character as deeply, or as readily, as girls. "Exactly what IS" is what boys want to talk about.  This points to the necessity of including Almost-Great Bad Guys in their reading, but also to including significant scaffolding through simplified models (analysis of 1-dimension antagonists and plots), visual models (comics, picture books, movies), and (new idea to me) even connections to the world of video games.  Please take the time to download this freely available curriculum, WoWinSchool - A Hero's Journey - written to make The World of Warcraft (along with The Hobbit) into a powerful, effective literacy experience.  Its authors speak to my point about connection, although they too undervalue the Bad Guys.  I am not a video game player, but I will ask the experts I know to give me advice about other game titles to include in my list. 

What are the important connections between the Almost-Great Bad Guy and the Protagonist?

Campbell
To the extent that the titles on my list are all versions of the Hero motif, the growth of/journey of the protagonist over time resulting from actions by the Bad Guy are a legitimate focus of analysis. Bad Guys enter in the initial stages of the cycle, but are also prominent in the Transformation and (sometimes) Atonement stages.

It is critically important for middle schoolers also to look at the nature of the antagonist independent from that of the hero.  As the hero grows and changes, so does the Almost-Bad Guy, the best of whom are remarkably adaptable. In fact, they may make a journey which is almost a mirror image of that taken by the hero.

As the perceptive adult reader knows, in the best literature bad is as complex as good, often more so. Understanding this complexity is the key to a successful completion of the hero's journey.  We see this element of Bad in the clues followed by Indiana Jones, in Gollum's teasings, in the riddles that must be solved in classic fantasies such as Over Sea, Under Stone, and in the many quests of Harry Potter. A successful hero must agree to battle complexity, or he will not win.  It is only through analysis leading to this conclusion that the developing-adult reader can buy into, or connect with, the importance of emulating the positive traits of the hero.  There is no heightened understanding to be had in reading fiction with a "just Cruel" or "just Evil" antagonist.

    What are the criteria for selection to my lists?  The Almost-Great Bad Guy:
    1. is gradually drawn or gradually introduced into the story, not a stereotype appearing suddenly in the plot as a complete creation. This is a major differentiation between "literary" characters and "fairy tale" or "picture book" characters - the reader should feel realization rather than surprise. Good writers will use many techniques of description, foreshadowing, metaphor, association, and symbolism to accomplish this character development;
    2. is unique in some way, compared to characters in other middle-level fiction. Although recognition of character patterns and models is an important challenge to the developing-adult reader,  defining unique characterization is even more important;
    3. has a least a modicum of complexity in and of himself. Often this takes the form of a character weakness, an error made, or another chink that the protagonist exploits. The more gradually this complexity is revealed the better. In the Almost-Great Bad Guy, this chink serves to replace true character complexity and arouses curiosity or questioning in the almost-adult reader;
    4. (related to #3) is not just Evil, and may not even contain elements of Evil. However, any discussion of Bad Guys must also be a discussion of Evil. Where is the line between good and evil drawn by the author? in life? in other books? This is a great use of a Concept Definition Map (see Teaching);
    5. is not a pure contrast to or opposite of the protagonist. That is a fairy-tale solution. Bad and Good should have a least one significant trait in common, which means that the Bad Guy does not have to be older, taller, smaller, smarter, stronger or anything more or less than the protagonist, just badder. 
    That, then, is my working definition.  If a student gains nothing more than an understanding of the above five points, he will enhance his ability to understand and appreciate Great Bad Guys in both fiction and fact later on.  I feel that without this early analysis the almost-adult reader will move forward with a fixed compass and rose-colored glasses.

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    My Lists

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    Children's Literature (openers and background) that can have a focus on the Bad Guy not the good guys. Graphic novel versions are available as well for most of these titles, and I highly recommend them for the classroom. Back-connecting to these visuals, simple plots, and 1-demensional Bad Guys are important to the development of more sophisticated literary understandings. Flesh out the characteristics (physical and personality) and actions of these characters. I would keep a chart displayed in the classroom throughout the unit.




    • "Rumpelstiltskin"
    • "Hansel and Gretel"
    • "Jack and the Beanstalk"
    • "Rapunzel"
    • "The Snow Queen"
    • A retelling of Theseus and the Minotaur (check out this great Wondermark comic)
    • Alice in Wonderland - any format, even Disney, will show the Red Queen for the bad gal she is, but other characters should also be discussed 
    • Chalk - Thomson - picture book 
    • Babar and Zephir - de Brunhoff - picture book - Polomoche is a fascinating Bad Guy who nearly gains Almost-Great status.  The blogger of Vintage Kids' Books agrees with me. 
    • Terrible Things: an Allegory of the Holocaust - Bunting - picture book - connection to reality (Holocaust) - can students suggest other books that make connections to reality-Bad?
    • The Lion and the Mouse - Pickney - picture book - discuss POV and absence of Evil here, as well as the weakness chink
    • The Wolves in the Walls - Gaimen - picture book - another discussion of POV - nice for its humor
    • Piggie Pie - Palatini - picture book - a witch with a personality
    • Dhegdeer: A Scary Somali Folktale - Hassan - picture book
    • Woolvs in the Sitee Wild - picture book to take seriously - this one disappeared twice from my grade 7 classroom library
    • Jabberwocky - illustrated by Myers (get that one) - you might do an all-class read-aloud of the Lewis Carroll before introducing this picture book - preconceptions and stereotype must enter the discussion here
    • The Widow's Broom - van Allsburg - picture book - all van Allsburg has a deeper level
    • X-men and other comic books - leave this up to your kids - prices have gone up on comics, so you may only get a few contributions to the class library, but there is a free DC Comics app!
    Read A-loud Books - make connections - these help to bring home the concept of Bad Guy related to Setting - like many of the picture books above, the gradual introduction of Bad comes through clearly in these stories.
    • Beowulf - a graphic novel or comic book version is great for this unit - Grendel's mother is the focus, but the arrival of Grendel should not be ignored
    • Coraline - Gaimen - movie or read-aloud
    • Weasel (also below) - many students will have met this book in earlier grades
    The Novels and Stories - Group or Independent Reading


    Elemental Forces / Situations Beyond Protagonist's Control
     
    Fantasy/SF
    • "The Lottery" - Jackson - this is an excellent story for Reader's Theater - dystopian
    • "Harrison Bergeron" - Bradbury
    • Pod - Wallenfels - fear of faceless aliens - human Bad Guys also surface in one of the scenarios, providing the underlying irony in the novel
    • Ship Breaker - Bacigalupi - situational, societal Bad - also a few human Bad Guys
    • Unwind - Schusterman - Bad Guys surface eventually, but the societal Bad is really what drives the novel
    • The Declaration - Malley - government, but an interesting Headmistress character (close to being Almost-Great) 
    • How I Live Now - Rosoff - terrorists, war
    • Life as We Knew It - Pfeffer - astronomical disaster - I love the persistent optimism that rises above the Bad in this book - can be a read-aloud
    • Little Brother - Doctorow - societal, government - also one good individual Bad Gal
    • Fahrenheit 451 - Bradbury -  societal, government, but also a good Monster and an Almost-Great antagonist
    Realistic
    • "The Red Room" - Wells - fear itself (available online)
    • The Lord of the Flies - Golding - situation
    • The Chocolate War - Cormier - school society
    • Give a Boy a Gun - Strasser - society, peer pressure, bullying
    • End Game - Garden  [I suggest you read it first] - society, peer pressure, bullying
    • Wringer - Spinelli - peer pressure 
    • The Wave - Strasser - bullying
    • Witness - Hesse - KKK, racism 
    • Once - Gleitzman - Holocaust
    • Milkweed - Spinelli - Holocaust
    • Night - Wiesel - Holocaust 
    Monsters and Men: Almost-Great Bad Guys in Fiction
     
    SF/Fantasy
    easier:
    • Skeleton Man - Bruchac - creature - would be a good read-aloud
    • Candor - Bachorz - father
    • The Dark Portal - Jarvis - mysterious creature, bad rats (I love this book)
    • Rash - Hautman - prison guards - the Bad is realistic, even though this is SF - interesting paired with Holes
    • The Book Without Words - Avi - magician - wonderful somewhat humorous scenes with Bad Guy
    • The Mysterious Benedict Society - Stewart - human
    • H.I.V.E. (series - read 1st one first) - Warner - good model of genre - human
    • Shadow Thieves - Ursu - gods and forces
    more challenging:
    • The Knife of Never Letting Go (3 in the series) - Ness - human man - wonderful contrast of men/monsters throughout the series - the Bad definitely gets badder as the series progresses
    • The Hunger Games - Collins - human men & women - all 3 in series are good, but #3 has the best of everythng
    • Clay - Almond - kid - retelling of the Golem story, so pair it with a Golem picture book or graphic novel - are "monsters" always Bad?
    • Good Omens - Pratchett and Gaimen - agents of God and Devil - a real challenge
    • The Book of Lost Things - Connolly - creature
    • The Hobbit, Lord of the Rings - Tolkien (read for Gollum especially)
    • The House of the Scorpion - Farmer - humans, some old, some not so
    • Twilight - Meyer - creatures - not my choice, but I give in to pressure from my girls - movie tie-in
    • The Gunslinger  (Dark Tower, Book 1) - King - human - not a "kids' book" but probably the best book on this list at identifying a complex protaganist (who can be very Bad) as well as other Bad Guys - would be interesting paired with the excellent graphic novel version and with Graceling (Cashore) or Mockingjay (Hunger Games, Book 3), which also contain ambivalent heroism
    Realistic
    easier:
    • Holes - Sachar - guards, including a woman - what great bad guys!
    • The Clique - Lisi Harrison - mean girls, in series
    more challenging: 
    • Revolver - Sedgwick - adult man
    • Hush, Hush - Fitzpatrick - sexual predator - use with caution
    • I am the Cheese - Cormier - adult man - has a movie tie-in
    • A Separate Peace - Knowles (does anyone read this anymore?) - teen
    • Monster - Myers - teen, but also Society
    Film and Other Media 
    • Who Framed Roger Rabbit?
    • Snow White (Disney)
    • Star Wars (all are good, Darth Vader most interesting)
    • The Golden Compass
    • 101 Dalmatians
    • It - not for the faint of stomach
    • Carrie
    • Heathers 
    • Bat Man
    • Road to Perdition - excellent for advanced students when paired with King's The Gunslinger
    • Independence Day - interesting, light pairing with Knife of Never Letting Go
    • Video Games:  World of Warcraft (any - use with curriculum),  Legend of Zelda (any), Final Fantasy VII, LittleBigPlanet (because this is a community game, you might have to introduce the students to Collector as part of front-loading)
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    Teaching Ideas
    Essential Questions for Discussion/Writing
    • Are all Bad Guys Evil?  What are the differences between Evil and Bad?
    • What is the connection between Actions and the people who perform them?  
    • What are the UR, or common, traits of Bad Guys?  of Bad Forces?  Think of both physical and personality/character traits.  Do these traits  hold up in real life?   
    • How have stereotyped Bad Guys/Gals evolved in today's fiction, movies, TV, comics?
    • Why are Bad Guys bad?  (What are the motives of Bad Guys?)
    • How do Bad Guys/ Bad Forces in fiction have a relevance beyond building plot and contrasting to the hero's/protagonist's character?
    • What are the connections between Bad Guys and the Settings in which they operate?
    • What connections can be made between the most successful Bad Guys in fiction and real (living or historical) bad people?  How can reading fiction help you gain better insights into real bad people?  There is a great opportunity to connect to both history and current events in this unit.  A read-aloud of Yep's short classic Hiroshima or selections from They Poured Fire on Us From the Sky or Little Bee will provoke a cross-over discussion.
    • What are the major tools used by protagonists to battle Bad Guys?  Is there a priority list? Is this list applicable to your battles with everyday bad people?
    • What can be learned from the names given to Bad Guys?
    Related Activities (just suggestions for activities that middle schoolers might enjoy - this is part of the Engagement and Connection process - see also ideas embedded in the essay)
    • Begin with children's texts and video - embed stereotypes in this unit! Have students make suggestions for content and share personal favorites
    • Create a reader's wiki like Spleefmistress' Guide to Being Evil - but make it focus on Being Really Bad  - the Motives and Careers sections are especially important, and I would add Actions as a category (I would not show the model site to the kids, by the way - just create a similar format and have them build on it)
    • Brainstorm/Concept Definition Map BAD - divide the exercise into "related words" - "connected reality" - "words beginning with..." - "images that come to mind" - Do the same with Evil  - Do the same with Good or Hero
    • Journal BAD - in the middle-level grades, this can be a cross between a diary and a journal.  I would suggest writing for at least 5 minutes every class during the unit - You can jump start writing with a list of situations or places students can connect to (e.g. kindergarten, playground, lockers, revenge, bullying, Facebook...) and build up to journaling about the readings
    • Use the district/school handbook as a literacy source: what are Bad actions in terms of the rules? How do they mesh with actions in the reading? 
    • Comics - use paper or digital tools to generate comic retellings of novels from the Bad Guy POV
    • Other writing activities might include: advice columns, diaries/media pages, Facebook pages - assign anything generally done from the protagonist POV
    • Film shorts of climactic scenes/important scenes from the POV of or highlighting the Bad Guy
    • Video humorous or satirical "news reports" and documentaries
    • Have students diagram the Bad Guy's Journey, ala Campbell (above). An alternative diagram is found here.  Discuss the differences between this and the hero's journey
    • If you want to make the video games connection (which I highly suggest as a choice), also make use of online resources  - most games have character descriptions online, as well as discussion boards (example: Collector, from The LittleBigPlanet)
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